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The shadows of your sorrows have shamed the sun,
Overpowering every ray before it reached the earth.
As you search for restitution but are met by none,
Your shadows spread further, eclipsing every new birth.
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The world has wronged you in ways impossible to discern
But insists on keeping you alive among the living;
To mock you? To torment you? To simply watch as you burn?
Perhaps to teach you lessons on how to be less forgiving.
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Your struggles have run deep until they now overflow
And the shadows of your burdens have unlocked the abyss;
Unleashing the beasts within each and every soul
And silencing all light the sun gives with a gnarling hiss.
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The shadows of your sorrows have shamed the sun.
Oh, human! How your victories mock your very soul!
You have challenged divinity for millennia and finally won;
Welcome to a new world where darkness devours you whole…
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Another one .. sigh or phew?!… who has forgiven the unforgivable and is not being forgiven for it.. Do you think there are enough of us to start a group before we head towards total annihilation? Peace
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Opposing what I wrote in that poem, I have to say yes, I do. There are indeed enough of us to overpower the darkest of hours.
Peace.
And many thanks.
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“And the shadows of your burdens have unlocked the abyss;”,,,,,,
thought provoking write… deep, like the Abyss.
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Thank you, Zen. Inspiration takes us to the strangest of territories sometimes.
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You’re my favourite poet, for more reasons than I can say!
Brilliant!
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Brilliant! The second stanza is my favorite!
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Thank you very much!
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