Tribute…


 

In tribute to the heart that has finally died

And pumped its final gush of blood and life…

In tribute to the decades of struggle and pride

That have lifted me up and cut me like a knife…

In tribute to the “almosts” this soul has had

Where hope kept trying but repeatedly failed

This battle has finally come to its inevitable end

And the final breath of life has been exhaled…

 

Here lies the soul of this battle’s loser…

Yet the body still lives on and on…

Lifeless…

Soul-less…

Hopeless…

 

I hope you rest in peace for you have always been a good companion…

6 March 2011

8 Replies to “Tribute…”

  1. My dear friend
    I’ve read it many times. can’t stop thinking of that feelings about life and death you gave me. It is a very meaningful piece of poetry.and as usual your words are amazing.

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  2. Budz I love it begad… its soo touching… and yes I can relate to what you mean …. will discuss when I see you isa…
    As always … lovely, absolutely lovely

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  3. تحية طيبة
    كلمات موفقة، الجميل أنها مجردة يجد فيها من يريد ما يريد، فأنا أرى فيها رثاءً لموت ثورة مصر التي ألهمت الكثير من المظلومين
    مع التمنيات بالنجاح الدائم
    وأدعوك لزيارة مدونتي

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  4. This has always been one of my favourite poems. Rereading it now, I realize I was right to hold it to be one of the best I’d ever read.

    I can only imagine what triggered your writing this. Must be profound beyond measure.

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    1. It was a painful experience that manifested itself in rhyme. This piece is very close to my heart.

      Thank you, Sunny. Your feedback is always as shining as you are!

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